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Judgmental

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Literature Text

Thoughts be shrunk,
Shrunk into doubt.
Doubt in living;
Living in fear,
Fear of being
Being self within.
In a world,
World gone mad
Mad with judgment...

Its become JudgMental.
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Skuldgirl's avatar
I love how you're basically playing end catcher with each line. It's a really nice touch. I have to ask, though.... Is "fear or being" supposed to be "fear of being"? Because "fear of being" makes more sense to me, but I could see how it could be either way. Just wondering.